Freewrite #4
Does he not see the pain clearly written on my face?
Can he see the tears flooding down my flushed cheeks?
Does he even care?
He's screaming and I'm screaming back.
Won't he ever realize how much this hurts?
Won't he ever see what I have to say?
Why doesn't he just knock me out?
When I come to,
Maybe things will have cooled down.
Maybe the fight will be forgotten.
Mabe he'll love me.
Does he not see the pain clearly written on my face?
Can he see the tears flooding down my flushed cheeks?
Does he even care?
He's screaming and I'm screaming back.
Won't he ever realize how much this hurts?
Won't he ever see what I have to say?
Why doesn't he just knock me out?
When I come to,
Maybe things will have cooled down.
Maybe the fight will be forgotten.
Mabe he'll love me.
posted by Kelly M. at 6:16 PM
1 Comments:
dang, this is heavy! What's up here? What are you basing this on?
good stuff (but dark and violent)
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